Da-Chibi's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Bring Me Up]

Meh....

Not bad...yet not badass. Keep trying

djhathor23 responds:

why make a comment if its not even useful? seriously grow up

[>>Heavenly Remix<<]

Needz moar power...

The song starts out quite beautifuly yet I'm still waiting for the chorus to really KICK it. Pretty but needs more opmph

Semaphore responds:

it's a soft trance song there is no BOOM BOOM and OPMPH! ;)

[_-={Garden of Memories}=-_]

DC2!!!

Dude! That's the song from Garden of Memories from Dark Cloud 2!! It's the Final georama map! I really like this song but it does differ a bit in some of the notes. but if you say it's from an MMORPG from Nyran, I guess they may have a legal battle to fight with the makers of Dark Cloud 2 regarding the music. Either way around, it sounds good.

MaestroRage responds:

Thank you Da-Chibi! You've totally shown us where this melody was from! We had a sneaking suspicion, a twinge of unrest while making it. Something told us it was so familiar, yet we could not seem to put our fingers on it.

This was not from the MMO, but FOR the MMO. Knowing where it is from, we will pull it, and replace it with something else.

Thank you for the review, really, we are glad you liked it!

[Bark.Open.Shoot.]

uhh..........meh..

The song it'self isn't too bad, it's just those pauses for those sound effects, that REALLY throws off the beat of the song. Please don't do that unless you still have the beat thumping somewhere in the background. Or at least have the sounds coordinate witht he rythim of the song and keep the beat. IT'S A DANCE SONG FOR CRYING OUT LOUD!!

project-ctrl responds:

:) Yeah now that I listen a second time, I see what you mean. Alright, no more pauses.

[Blake-Nowhere near(SkiLz-remix]

hmmm

I've never heard the orignal song of this remix but I must say it is very relaxing. After hearing this song the feeling of constant impending doom sligly disipated from my mind..nice. Tis rare for me to come across music that cures insanity, not provoke it...

DJ-SkiLLz responds:

hey thanks man
thats has to be one of the most interesting reviews i've ever had!!!
lol
peace

[Bounty Hunter]

get a friggin metronome

before you start playing with unstable beats..first try to be ON BEAT!! I think it's just sad how badly you slaughtered this song. It has a good melody to it, but Trance is suposed to have a beat to it. It just sounds like you're just slamming keys on a keyboard. What I need for you to do is learn to count to 4, then try to acutally TIME your music to your counting. That is when you'll make some friggin' music. Once you get a sence of rythim, THEN you may start to put in some unstable beats. Or you could at least get some piano lessons. This really scuks!!

trekopep responds:

Hey, I DO take piano lessons. ;) I always turn off the metrenome when I'm making my songs. Don't ask me why. But I'll take your advise and use a friggin metronome next time. Also, I made that song in about an hour. Of course, that doesn't make it any better. But does it really deserve a 0?! I mean, you should at least change your aura if you're gonna do that. ;) I'll work at my songs for longer next time, add more instonments, use a metronome, a make a song that's ON BEAT. Thanks for your review. I'll take your advise. ^^

[[Trance Waltz] -ZERO-]

one too many beatz for a waltz!

It almost sounds like a waltz but it still has that 4th count beat into it. You provide the illuzion of a waltz like sound in the main melody, but a waltz is determined by a 3-beat count dude. Usually trance, dance, and techno music dosen't have the style to properly support a propper waltz..If ever you do create a 3-beat trance song I will absolutely LOVE to hear it!

X-Infinity-Zero responds:

like i said in the last review response in time i will take this song and try to make it a true waltz. u say it may be a challenge but hell im up for it. ill c what i can do.

[[Trance Waltz V2] -ZERO-]

This be not a waltz!

As for this song, it does sound nice, but I don't hear ANYWHERE in the peice a 3/3 beat...not even a 2/3 beat. This is not a waltz! It sounds like ballroom fancy dance music but a waltz must have a 3-count beat detected in the song. this is 2/2 at best if not 4/4.

X-Infinity-Zero responds:

hey dude its just a name calm down.

the song was originally supposed to be done only with a piano. it somehow evolved into what it is now. it had a trance feel with yet and elegant feel at the same time. so i wanted an elegant word in the title and waltz was the first one that came to mind.

im sorry if it wasnt what you thought it would be but its to late to change the name now.

i might try and turn it into a real waltz if i have time but i got some other songs to get done first.

so again im sorry if it was misleading.

[-_-_-*trance dance (4)*-_-_-]

Niiice!!

Good trance music is hard to come by outside Europe and Japan...This really sounds great and joyful! It has a melody that's pleasant to the ears, and is acutally in sycronizion with the beat...unlike 87% of all American Trance music (coughchoughhackwhitepeoplecouchhack*). Speaking of the beat, you can feel it here without the aid of deep bass which is also a good sign for GOOD trance music.

aspachi responds:

it's always great to hear reviews from all of you! ^_^ i guess it wasa good idea to make an all trance song with no bass or whatsoever? i just threw in a bit of this and that and here you go.....PURE TRANCE!

[Gospel Trance Mix]

pretty fast...

I gotta ask ya. What makes this Gospel Trance? Anyways it does sound okay as far trance music goes, but that instrament your using with the main melody and the way it reverbs make it sound unbalanced and creepy, and it also sounds off beat from the drum sound in the bacground. The Reverb from that high pitched sound is really killing the song. the timeing of the reverb doesn't exactly syncronize with the beat...it sounds like a dozen violens thrown into a wood chipper. Calm it down a bit.

DJ-DaVinster responds:

Thanks for the advice. :)