Da-Chibi's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Davy Jones]

Beautiful......

Absolutely beautiful!! I really love that opening with that music box!

Aslan-Emanuel responds:

Thank you!

[AMG!!!11one, ALIENS!!!]

It needs a melody

I'm no expert in making trance music, but I do know what good music sounds like. First of all, Your song needs a key melody which is catchy, this builds up with a rythim or what many call a "beat". Try listening to some cool drum patterns then try to combine those beats with melody and sound that builds. As I said, I am no expert but I'm pretty dayam sure this will signifigantly improve what you have here
or one cheep suggestion, listen to the music you LIKE and try to immitate what they do. This commonly works in many mediums of art including martial arts :3

. Good luck.

Eilios responds:

I'm not really sure if you even heard 40 seconds of this O.O

[Fallen Divine X]

Most Awesome!

I usually don't listen to classical, but this is a very nice relaxing song. Perfect track for game over music.

samusmmx responds:

Why thank you so much, glad that you think so. ;3

[_/Lost in the Darkness\_ demo]

not bad..

At least it doesn't suck. You pass my friend.

ShootingStar responds:

Umm.Thanks for the review!

[Anxiety Cure - Club (A->N)]

RESPECKK!!!!

Now I can REALLY Move my body to THIS!!! XD

ApproachingNirvana responds:

Haha, thanks!

[Feel what I feel]

Niceness!!

I congradulate you for you noticable lack of suck at making this song. I do feel that it could use some more kick, but it is still somthing I can move my body to. Keep up the good work.

Darkmoor responds:

thx for the review. Yeah I just finished this one so its practically still undergoing some last "beta" testing. Gonna check what I can do about that kick.

[\Listen to Your Heart Remix/]

Simple.

Simple but nice to listen to. I think it needs more omph but this song is allright. You pass.

Adamaja456 responds:

thank you sir
<3

[Liquid Lightning]

You FAIL!!1

Too much random noise, and the beat is off, not to mention its WAAAY to fruggin' repetitive. You Fail at Trance sir.

Hyper-Shadow-Death responds:

Thats too bad you didn't like it, you seem to be the only one to think so. If the beat was off then I don't think this song would score so high let alone I made it in Fruity Loops which makes it very hard to have something off beat when they're calculated blocks your working with. Repetitive yea i'll agree with you there but looks like you fail at knowing whats on or off beat sir.

[Northern breeze]

Noticable lack of awesome

This song is WAAYYY too repetitive and doesn't go anywhere. I'm sure it would be good for some kinda menu BGM but I seriouly can't enjoy this.

TerraNation responds:

i see, you havent heard much classic trance before, beside whatever u listen to all songs are repetitive remeber that.

[Hopeku - Crazy Illness]

meh

It dosen't suck, it just doens't move me.

hopeku responds:

I totally respect that!